User blog comment:Vertigoconquers/Protip: How to Make a Better Article/@comment-25285745-20150521154202/@comment-1030114-20150522094848

I just think that the sad thing is, that we've recieved criticism in mostly the same format, which has made us desensitized. Although Vertigo's dialogue does offer a lot of help, most of the information he has been giving us is stuff that we already know to do. His long-winded 'essay', could have easily been rewritten in a single paragraph.

For example:

"I can tell that this Wiki does better than Wikipedia at recording information, but you need to keep your pages up to date. Here's a few sources which can help."

As you can see, that above paragraph is effectively what he stated, but in a far less patronizing way.