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King Ghidorah Review

Backstory: I like the vague backstory, it adds to the mystery of Ghidorah.

Power: The scientific analysis on how the Gravity Beam works is interesting, and it sounds like something an actual scientist in one of the movies would say. However, I find it odd how Ghidorah can use his Gravity Powers to control the gravity around other lifeforms. I know he can manipulate gravity and such, I just think that power doesn't suit Ghidorah. SpaceGodzilla, maybe (Since he also has gravity defying powers and has shown them in his movie debut), but not Ghidorah.

Now for the another problem that I have with his powers: "The Tri-Elemental Destroyer". This move REALLY doesn't fit Ghidorah, in my opinion. Ghidorah already has electricity powers, he shouldn't have fire or ice powers! It's too much, and there's no explanation for it. If there's one thing I like about it, it's that it takes a while to charge, so it's not OP.

Another thing; his flight speed can be modified a bit. Mach 9 is too fast for Ghidorah. If he could go that fast in space, I would accept it, but seeing how Ghidorah is a giant, lumbering dragon from space, I find it hard to believe that something that big could move so fast.

And finally, there's a little bit of inconsistency towards the end. Earlier in the "power" section, you state that King Ghidorah has no regeneration whatsoever, but towards the end of the section, you state that he has a slow and weak regeneration. If I were you, I would go with no regeneration. It balances things out a bit so he's not too powerful.

Personality: Rather than looking at this from a Godzilla movie standpoint, I'll just review this like I'm reviewing a character from a show.

The "twisted" personality fits Ghidorah. However, said personality makes Ghidorah sound extremely flat as a character; displaying only a single, cocky, trait.

Conclusion:  I think you made a pretty admirable adaptation of the King Ghidorah character. Yes, he has an "out-of-place" ability, a promising yet flat personality, and has a speed that could be adjusted, but these problems can be fixed easily.

If possible, I would like to see your adaptation of Hedorah.