User blog comment:Cloverfield monster/My attempt at a Godzilla YTP./@comment-2145732-20140927193542/@comment-3367060-20140927195714

Right off the bat... one thing bad about this one is the opening. It's way too long. By the time the 14 seconds are up, anyone who would've watched it has already clicked away to something more interesting...

And again, you're not sentence-mixing, you're just inserting words and memes from other things and not doing any real editing...