User blog:Flaredragon00/Hey, mind giving me critiques?

https://sites.google.com/site/thefightofkaiju/

I made my own Godzilla fanon website. I decided to make a blog post acting for critique. The site is still incomplete, so expect me to post links to new pages in the comments section. Be as nitpicky as you want! The only thing I ask is for you to give reasons for your claim. I don't just want "It's stupid." I want "It's stupid because." I will respond to your questions/critiques with answers, and I will correct things as well.

Also, just as a little question, which kaiju should I do next? Or should I get started on the "races" category?

Also, note: this is an open critique. Anyone can comment. I won't bite.